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"Finally, from so little sleep and so much reading, her brain dried up and she went completely out of her mind."
The Ideal Cut - Elinor Gray

This was a fun little short.  One thing that bothers me in stories, though, if when a thief or assassin acts unprofessionally.  I know I know, that sounds stupid.  But Clayton is supposedly this world renowned jewel thief, but he's bumbling around through the first half of the story.  It was cute the way they found each other out, but I wish he had been confident up until that point instead of bumbling.  It just didn't ring true.  

Opposite issue with Theo.  He was all suave, calm-cool-and-collected during the heist, then was all innocent newbie the next morning.  I will, however, say... that sex scene was smokin! Cute little HFN.