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"Finally, from so little sleep and so much reading, her brain dried up and she went completely out of her mind."
Scrum - P.D. Singer

Not bad. I like this general story line. But the set up felt off to me and unnatural. I just didn't feel the connection at all. Robin knew nothing about Yves really, just thought he was hot. There were waaaaaay too many rugby details so the majority of the story is just Robin describing the rugby game he's watching. The little twist made it seem like they at least had a little bit of a connection, but it was the only possible explanation so I had guessed that was probably the twist.