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"Finally, from so little sleep and so much reading, her brain dried up and she went completely out of her mind."
Dirty Cop - Kyle Adams I love me some Kyle Adams, and this is his usual fun, silly, and sexy short. Now for a little constructive criticism... I think it would have been better served without the beginning part with Leia the dog. I get that that was where a lot of the humor came in, but it gave a spoiler because it meant our MC was either cheating or much more likely role playing with his partner, the cop and that took away a lot of the fun surprise that could have happened at the end.

"When the officer approached the window, he said ‘Papers’ and before he could finish, I shouted, ‘Scissors! I win,’ and drove off.”