Hmm... definitely tricky to rate. I find myself being harsher on it because there is soooo much potential and I want to read the full-length version of this! This was cute and sweet but didn't evoke too much emotion because
it was so short. I definitely think that sex scene should have had more dialogue and been much more emotionally charged given that Matt had loved him for four years, I really wanted to cry but it just didn't happen. Also, a longer length would have allowed for the more appropriate turmoil and indecisiveness. I don't think their relationship is weird or incestuous at all. Matt was already 14 years old, Patrick was more of a guardian than a father-figure. But still, that needed more time to develop and allow for some show instead of a quick recap.
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