GAH, that was so freaken good but I'm tempted to bump it down a star for not having ONE MORE chapter!!! Obviously, if Jaime really felt so bad about tormenting Casper in high school, and was really in love with him, he should have talked to him and begged forgiveness and then maybe tried to build a tentative friendship and THEN try to progress to lovers.... not start groping him in the shadows. BUT, it was cute and funny and sweet and sad and I loved every second of it!
A couple things that, while not quite complaints, might have helped make the story more realistic or emotionally effective:
1) I liked the blindfold but I wish Casper had refused to be tied up. I think it would make it more realistic (given he doesn't know this guy) and if he briefly said he had a bad experience then I think it would drive home more to Jaime, and therefor to the reader that Jaime gets, how much the bullying affected and still affects Casper.
2) v-card I can't decide if I like that Casper was a virgin. It just makes it so much less believable that he would let a stranger blindfold and fuck him. And it's kind of a HUGE emotional betrayal from Jaime if Casper decides he couldn't forgive him. It takes the choice of knowingly sleeping with his tormenter out of Casper's hands which is a little fucked up. But I did like that aspect, so maybe if Casper wasn't a virgin it wouldn't be as
big a deal?
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